The sun was gradually vanishing from my line of sight, hiding behind the towering trees as the moon began to take its place in the sky. As I looked down I saw how high I was and was a bit nervous. My talons gripped the thick bark tighter than usual as I was looking down and anticipating the thoughts of my first flight, which was taking place tonight.
I watched my family as I questioned my mother “is it time yet?” “she murmured a quiet “yes,it is time”. I drew my wings as I was ready to fly. I flapped my wings. But I realized I couldn’t move my body as if time took a pause, the fear inside of me was too much for me to even move.
My mother watched me and realized it was not my time yet. She spoke softly “Maybe another time”. I drew back my wings in disappointment as I watched from afar, as my family flew off one after another.
I watched my family as I questioned my mother “is it time yet?” “she murmured a quiet “yes,it is time”. I drew my wings as I was ready to fly. I flapped my wings. But I realized I couldn’t move my body as if time took a pause, the fear inside of me was too much for me to even move.
My mother watched me and realized it was not my time yet. She spoke softly “Maybe another time”. I drew back my wings in disappointment as I watched from afar, as my family flew off one after another.
Everyday after that moment I tried and tried, and grew my confidence being able to jump but still failed to flap my wings within the ideal time. I gripped my talons one last time as I was about to give up, I had the constant thought of this was gonna be it and this was my time to fly.
My family saw my struggle and supported me, especially my mother, she spoke with confidence “believe in yourself and fly like the wind”. I drew in my wings as I was thinking this was the time, the time for me to fly. I let go of the bark and started flapping my wings and I realized at last, my talons were finally off the bark, I looked beneath
me and finally saw me hovering above. I moved forward, gaining more speed. I looked at my right seeing my family but to the left I saw my mothers face filled with happiness, I was proud and thankful of myself and my family for helping me build up the courage to fly and soar through the sky.
Mrs Anderson read us the book ‘First Flight’ by June Crebbin. We talked about the narrators point of view and used a Gemini Gem to prompt us to think more deeply about what the story might look like when told in the first person.
I enjoyed using the Gem because it helped me with my words and my grammar for the paragraph.


